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Season 6 MLP premiere, my rewrite I would have complebely rewrittem the episode. Below ia my draft, ther's atilla lot of room foe poli止The tldr is that I absolutely hated it, but saw there was a lot of potestial. Also, to be clear: New recurring characters are fine. Mainatas aren The plot bait thet gets them to the Caystal Empire would be thet they found thet Sunburst lives there, and this eould be an eplsode revolving around Spke, Twilight, and Starlight in the first act, and then adding on Sunberst, Celestia, Cadenoe, and Shining Armor in the latter two actx. By the way, that meana no RD, AI, FS, PP,or RY.Y I am that bola But while they're over there, Spike beeaks the heert with a plot macgoffin ('s better than the baby bevaking it, eroualy.ve could say that he being hard eaused him to sereteh the beart when poishing it or something, and the fracture was nough to cause it to shatter because magical artifact and whatnot) which causes bit ofa Once a dragon who was worshipped for saving mpire twice,b's now set himavilf to be 自character who's part of the egret plotline, along e'idaa big deal T k wih tha Lat'swith Starlight Glimmer and Sunburst (who is had or gotting a coeticn with the plot t foil), This is important for another reason, Games), this one's poing to be a bit more severe than simple embarmassment in poblic Thio are the sesice of the frectsred peeniere and Starlight assume is n addition to Sunbursts Wizardry, or part of it) She notioes somethinga amiaa, but she wanta Starlight to do thia on her own. Unfortunately, wvather be so at lewst we got that right her to do this since she's doneit alioorns to stem the tide, with their beet chance being Sumbunst (who they don't mention by name, ar Celeotia ruins the surprin, Twilight will aay Starlight's old friend in aizard wh might be able to belp") and thi is due in large part to them knowing be knoms a thingor theo about magienl tifacts. Meanwhile, Spike and Shining Amor evecuate the empire. academics, Starlight's cult leading and world destroying) and move on. At any rate, the no longer a macguffinset of spellsaving the kingdom are found and thary run to the courtyard something the audience ceres about.). Also if the writers really wanted they coukd take this opportunity to have Celestia "ah that's an old student of mine awesome dragrnwheshold be able to be happy with ontrolling his dragonabilitiesn. And Starlight and Sunbuest beeak past their lies and not oaly become true to each other as friends, they mend the frlendship and together move on from the past. Episodeends with sort of plot hait that senda them to th·ofher mane 4, and then ytra have it, the sesoon6 opener. I'm nok expecting to do this much. We all know that the only good weitees left are Polblky and Thiessen, with Larson gone, Rogees gone, and MeCarthy busy working on the movte, we're left with Levinger, Confalone, Lewis and Sonoo, Dusedau, and Haber. And based on their history with the show (and how moch each of them failed in complotely fantastic way), I'm not conEdentNow,theow wribers can peove me wrong Williams peuved me wrong when she wrote Weaderbelt Academy, an episode I thought wa really fantastic). But these are my thoughts on the state of the show and why I feel Maybe it's not entirely the weitera fwalt. To be really honeat, when yos work for a toy company that wants to advestise canon breaking toys, you ean only really do so much teo soften the blow(Larsondid what he could MMC, but you could onlydoso much touplift something that destroys the very fabrie of the stability of the show) And then you have the writers being foroed to back everything that's being aaid, ehich is junt a bit of an epected ooepoeabe thing. I'we been part of groupa or worked for joba where I absolutely could not talk behind their back on social media, soI know whet it's lke to be coereed into crap while working on a project whem you don't agree with the direction. Perhape Ican't rvaly ive the writers too muchflack for thi, but the conseq

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While I'm all for fan-rewrites of some of the poorer episodes. (I'll admit I've done it myself several times before.) This is less, trying to fix problems to, ripping something apart because of an aspect they personally didn't like… and making it worse as a result…

While I can't nitpick and point out each flaw here and there, this really does have that feeling of "poorly written fanfic" to it.

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